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Old 09-10-2012, 11:58 AM   #1
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Old 09-10-2012, 12:02 PM   #2
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...your avatar is fantastic, buddy. I have been watching Sherlock on Netflix and thought "the BBC makes some good shows."
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Old 09-10-2012, 12:38 PM   #4
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...your avatar is fantastic, buddy. I have been watching Sherlock on Netflix and thought "the BBC makes some good shows."
Top gear is a great show on BBC and because of that show I've been watching other shows on that channel. Dr Who? Etc.

American shows have really gone downhill.
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Old 09-10-2012, 12:44 PM   #5
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sherlock is cool...never mind telly...do i have a journo chance lol?
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Old 09-10-2012, 01:54 PM   #6
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Top gear is a great show on BBC and because of that show I've been watching other shows on that channel. Dr Who? Etc.

American shows have really gone downhill.
Dr. Who has sucked for 20 years.
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Old 09-10-2012, 02:06 PM   #7
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So the two of you have that in common.
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Old 09-10-2012, 02:38 PM   #8
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Dr. Who has sucked for 20 years.


Doctor Who is cheesy sci-fi at it's finest.


On topic, good first report. Better than anything I could write.
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Old 09-10-2012, 06:01 PM   #9
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most excellent, dudette. very accurate. good capture of the energy. could use some more Woody double entendres. easy to dance to. 9.2 for the beat.
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I thought the report was good. I just didnt like the font. I know thats kinda picky, but it made it kinda hard to read. other than that...good job.

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Old 09-11-2012, 11:42 AM   #11
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Thanks for feedback.. we decided on the font because its like me ...loud.
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Old 09-11-2012, 11:50 AM   #12
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Keep at it and let someone proof read your stuff and you'll get there, blue. You obviously know more about the Broncos and NFL than probably most people in the UK, I would wager. That comes through.
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Old 09-11-2012, 11:54 AM   #14
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Ive added MVP poll as well if anyone wants a peep.
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Old 09-11-2012, 12:02 PM   #15
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Keep at it and let someone proof read your stuff and you'll get there, blue. You obviously know more about the Broncos and NFL than probably most people in the UK, I would wager. That comes through.
there is noone i know to proof read here unfortunetly. I run a spell check thru though.
Theres a good few over here now.Ive got my nephew into us big time and my 14 year old has said enough is enough hes gonna start watching at his mums.
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Old 09-11-2012, 12:13 PM   #16
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Which 20 years? It went off the air in 89 and didn't reappear until 2005.
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Which 20 years? It went off the air in 89 and didn't reappear until 2005.
well you got a point there. Dr. Who has always sucked. Of course in the early days it got by on cheap special effects and cardboard box robots so it was campy and kind of fun.
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well you got a point there. Dr. Who has always sucked. Of course in the early days it got by on cheap special effects and cardboard box robots so it was campy and kind of fun.
That was the fun part early on. We would watch just to see the scenery move.
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I thought the report was good. I just didnt like the font. I know thats kinda picky, but it made it kinda hard to read. other than that...good job.

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http://www.overseasorangearmy.co.uk/...-37/4569355034
Font taken on board..report for Fade...Ive been hungover all day
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25,000 visitors...if youve been one may I thank you ,I never expected 25 let alone thousands.
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25,000 visitors...if youve been one may I thank you ,I never expected 25 let alone thousands.
Hey man that is a lot of traffic congrats.
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Old 10-09-2012, 08:47 AM   #23
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As Khan said, you need to have someone proofread your work. That still doesn't take away from a good point. The defense HAS to step up.

While we are talking about Doctor Who, I have to say that Matt Smith (the current Doctor) brings back the fun of Doctors in the 70s and 80s. I agree that the cheesiness is part of the Doctor Who appeal. David Tennant and Christopher Eccleston played the role way too straight...
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thanks appreciate all points,I take everything on board ie font change. I hear the proofreading but I dont know anyone who can. I run the spell check but then i use it.
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"Paly-offs?"

I think that needs to be changed.
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