My 1st Try At A Report - The Orange Mane

broncoblue · 09-10-2012, 11:58 AM

http://www.overseasorangearmy.co.uk/...nes/4559988175
DONE IT ,MY FIRST EVER TRY AT A MATCH REPORT...BE GENTLE HA

myMind · 09-10-2012, 12:02 PM

A for effort? (and avatar)

Kaylore · 09-10-2012, 12:03 PM

...your avatar is fantastic, buddy. I have been watching Sherlock on Netflix and thought "the BBC makes some good shows."

24champ · 09-10-2012, 12:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Kaylore

...your avatar is fantastic, buddy. I have been watching Sherlock on Netflix and thought "the BBC makes some good shows."

Top gear is a great show on BBC and because of that show I've been watching other shows on that channel. Dr Who? Etc.

American shows have really gone downhill.

broncoblue · 09-10-2012, 12:44 PM

sherlock is cool...never mind telly...do i have a journo chance lol?

Rock Chalk · 09-10-2012, 01:54 PM

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Originally Posted by 24champ

Top gear is a great show on BBC and because of that show I've been watching other shows on that channel. Dr Who? Etc.

American shows have really gone downhill.

Dr. Who has sucked for 20 years.

Pendejo · 09-10-2012, 02:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Rock Chalk

Dr. Who has sucked for 20 years.

So the two of you have that in common.

Lycan · 09-10-2012, 02:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Rock Chalk

Dr. Who has sucked for 20 years.

Doctor Who is cheesy sci-fi at it's finest.

On topic, good first report. Better than anything I could write.

orinjkrush · 09-10-2012, 06:01 PM

most excellent, dudette. very accurate. good capture of the energy. could use some more Woody double entendres. easy to dance to. 9.2 for the beat.

briane · 09-10-2012, 07:45 PM

I thought the report was good. I just didnt like the font. I know thats kinda picky, but it made it kinda hard to read. other than that...good job.

GO BRONCOS!

broncoblue · 09-11-2012, 11:42 AM

Thanks for feedback.. we decided on the font because its like me ...loud.

Kaylore · 09-11-2012, 11:50 AM

Keep at it and let someone proof read your stuff and you'll get there, blue. You obviously know more about the Broncos and NFL than probably most people in the UK, I would wager. That comes through.

bronco militia · 09-11-2012, 11:51 AM

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Originally Posted by Rock Chalk

Dr. Who has sucked for 20 years.

this^

broncoblue · 09-11-2012, 11:54 AM

Ive added MVP poll as well if anyone wants a peep.

broncoblue · 09-11-2012, 12:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Kaylore

Keep at it and let someone proof read your stuff and you'll get there, blue. You obviously know more about the Broncos and NFL than probably most people in the UK, I would wager. That comes through.

there is noone i know to proof read here unfortunetly. I run a spell check thru though.
Theres a good few over here now.Ive got my nephew into us big time and my 14 year old has said enough is enough hes gonna start watching at his mums.

DenverBrit · 09-11-2012, 12:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Rock Chalk

Dr. Who has sucked for 20 years.

Which 20 years? It went off the air in 89 and didn't reappear until 2005.

Tombstone RJ · 09-11-2012, 12:15 PM

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Originally Posted by DenverBrit

Which 20 years? It went off the air in 89 and didn't reappear until 2005.

well you got a point there. Dr. Who has always sucked. Of course in the early days it got by on cheap special effects and cardboard box robots so it was campy and kind of fun.

DenverBrit · 09-11-2012, 12:27 PM

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Originally Posted by Tombstone RJ

well you got a point there. Dr. Who has always sucked. Of course in the early days it got by on cheap special effects and cardboard box robots so it was campy and kind of fun.

That was the fun part early on. We would watch just to see the scenery move.

broncoblue · 09-12-2012, 01:48 PM

amy pond pwooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ar

broncoblue · 10-01-2012, 12:49 PM

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Originally Posted by briane

I thought the report was good. I just didnt like the font. I know thats kinda picky, but it made it kinda hard to read. other than that...good job.

GO BRONCOS!

http://www.overseasorangearmy.co.uk/...-37/4569355034
Font taken on board..report for Fade...Ive been hungover all day

broncoblue · 10-09-2012, 07:41 AM

25,000 visitors...if youve been one may I thank you ,I never expected 25 let alone thousands.

theAPAOps5 · 10-09-2012, 07:43 AM

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Originally Posted by broncoblue

25,000 visitors...if youve been one may I thank you ,I never expected 25 let alone thousands.

Hey man that is a lot of traffic congrats.

Crushaholic · 10-09-2012, 08:47 AM

As Khan said, you need to have someone proofread your work. That still doesn't take away from a good point. The defense HAS to step up.

While we are talking about Doctor Who, I have to say that Matt Smith (the current Doctor) brings back the fun of Doctors in the 70s and 80s. I agree that the cheesiness is part of the Doctor Who appeal. David Tennant and Christopher Eccleston played the role way too straight...

broncoblue · 10-11-2012, 05:39 AM

thanks appreciate all points,I take everything on board ie font change. I hear the proofreading but I dont know anyone who can. I run the spell check but then i use it.

Bacchus · 10-11-2012, 06:14 AM

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Originally Posted by broncoblue

http://www.overseasorangearmy.co.uk/...nes/4559988175
DONE IT ,MY FIRST EVER TRY AT A MATCH REPORT...BE GENTLE HA

"Paly-offs?"

I think that needs to be changed.

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09-10-2012, 12:02 PM	#2
myMind splinters reality until We Grok Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Denver Posts: 1,371 Adopt-a-Bronco: None	A for effort? (and avatar)

09-10-2012, 12:03 PM	#3
Kaylore 6-37, Raider fans. Yummy birds and snow! Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Ceti Alpha V Posts: 41,074 Adopt-a-Bronco: Wesley Duke	...your avatar is fantastic, buddy. I have been watching Sherlock on Netflix and thought "the BBC makes some good shows."

09-10-2012, 12:44 PM	#5
broncoblue english not british!! Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: nr blackburn ,england Posts: 3,739	sherlock is cool...never mind telly...do i have a journo chance lol?

09-10-2012, 06:01 PM	#9
orinjkrush ... Prospects for the future... Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: DistrictOfCorruption Posts: 4,914 Adopt-a-Bronco: Ben Garland	most excellent, dudette. very accurate. good capture of the energy. could use some more Woody double entendres. easy to dance to. 9.2 for the beat.

09-10-2012, 07:45 PM	#10
briane Seasoned Veteran http://www.privatepostmark.com Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Texas Posts: 368 Adopt-a-Bronco: None	I thought the report was good. I just didnt like the font. I know thats kinda picky, but it made it kinda hard to read. other than that...good job. GO BRONCOS!

09-11-2012, 11:42 AM	#11
broncoblue english not british!! Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: nr blackburn ,england Posts: 3,739	Thanks for feedback.. we decided on the font because its like me ...loud.

09-11-2012, 11:50 AM	#12
Kaylore 6-37, Raider fans. Yummy birds and snow! Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Ceti Alpha V Posts: 41,074 Adopt-a-Bronco: Wesley Duke	Keep at it and let someone proof read your stuff and you'll get there, blue. You obviously know more about the Broncos and NFL than probably most people in the UK, I would wager. That comes through.

09-11-2012, 11:54 AM	#14
broncoblue english not british!! Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: nr blackburn ,england Posts: 3,739	Ive added MVP poll as well if anyone wants a peep.

09-12-2012, 01:48 PM	#19
broncoblue english not british!! Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: nr blackburn ,england Posts: 3,739	amy pond pwooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ar

10-09-2012, 07:41 AM	#21
broncoblue english not british!! Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: nr blackburn ,england Posts: 3,739	25,000 visitors...if youve been one may I thank you ,I never expected 25 let alone thousands.

10-09-2012, 08:47 AM	#23
Crushaholic Armchair Poster Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Topeka, KS Posts: 22,045	As Khan said, you need to have someone proofread your work. That still doesn't take away from a good point. The defense HAS to step up. While we are talking about Doctor Who, I have to say that Matt Smith (the current Doctor) brings back the fun of Doctors in the 70s and 80s. I agree that the cheesiness is part of the Doctor Who appeal. David Tennant and Christopher Eccleston played the role way too straight...

10-11-2012, 05:39 AM	#24
broncoblue english not british!! Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: nr blackburn ,england Posts: 3,739	thanks appreciate all points,I take everything on board ie font change. I hear the proofreading but I dont know anyone who can. I run the spell check but then i use it.