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Old 02-07-2013, 12:18 PM   #9
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Originally Posted by TheReverend View Post
lol I think Sanderson did a great job, actually. I just think in the end, it showed that it wasn't HIS baby, ya know?

The covers got a LITTLE better at the end, but I know EXACTLY what you're talking about.

Also, you must understand I worship Jordan so it's almost like you're equating me to YHVH in your last paragraph.

You will now be repped with even more frequency.
Well....I'll knock you down a peg then. I like his characters more than yours. You are good at introducing characters. You reveal their character elements and motivations in not beat-you-over-the-head ways. This really helps in remembering them and caring enough to remember them. But caring about them only happens if you like the characters. I'd say for me, you're not there yet, but it could be my style preference. You don't write material that I usually read.

I never tell a writer what they should do instead. I learned that is not helpful. But I will share what doesn't work for me. That's always seems to be helpful.
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