Originally Posted by SouthStndJunkie
I read 60 pages of the book before I went to bed last night.
You've done an excellent job of putting someone who has never been to a Marine boot camp in Marine boot camp and giving them a very good idea of what it's like.
Thanks man. That's the purpose... they even simplified it a bit in the last edit to keep the focus on that purpose which I wasn't too pleased with.
Have you noticed the occasional extra period? Some of my time lapse line breaks were removed so you have gotten confused by any parts?