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Old 08-25-2008, 10:10 AM   #14
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Okay, posting up the full chapter one.

Anyone who posts things they feel aren't clear, what they feel should be expanded or cut out, criticism whether constructive or deconstructive, will be greatly appreciated.

Edit: Sorry about the odd format display... maybe a mod knows how to fix that?

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