Bah, just take the buzzed and writing in stride - everything in moderation.
- seriously - i really dig it - and i think it will fit really well into what i've seen before.
It's crazy - but you and i (reverend) sort of "see" the same way. I totally get what you are doing. So critical of writing style i may not be your "best" guest, but i can tell you if i think it's good. I do. (so far).