Originally Posted by Ray Finkle
I like it. You write very well....great discription without having to spell everything out for the reader...
See they took me by the hand
And invited me right in
And they showed me something
I don't even know where to begin!
Really though, it's gonna be a fun story... it ends up being about the 2nd coming in modern times but he doesn't know he's divine. So he has human flaws and reactions and happens to be supremely powerful once he understands himself etc. Blah, blah, blah, I'm self-important everyone look at what I've wrritten!
...but when it comes out, buy 10, it'll make great gifts... especially to religious family members!