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My 1st Try At A Report
http://www.overseasorangearmy.co.uk/...nes/4559988175
DONE IT ,MY FIRST EVER TRY AT A MATCH REPORT...BE GENTLE HA |
A for effort? (and avatar)
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...your avatar is fantastic, buddy. I have been watching Sherlock on Netflix and thought "the BBC makes some good shows."
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American shows have really gone downhill. |
sherlock is cool...never mind telly...do i have a journo chance lol?
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Doctor Who is cheesy sci-fi at it's finest. On topic, good first report. Better than anything I could write. |
most excellent, dudette. very accurate. good capture of the energy. could use some more Woody double entendres. easy to dance to. 9.2 for the beat. :)
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I thought the report was good. I just didnt like the font. I know thats kinda picky, but it made it kinda hard to read. other than that...good job.
GO BRONCOS! |
Thanks for feedback.. we decided on the font because its like me ...loud.
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Keep at it and let someone proof read your stuff and you'll get there, blue. You obviously know more about the Broncos and NFL than probably most people in the UK, I would wager. That comes through.
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Ive added MVP poll as well if anyone wants a peep.
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Theres a good few over here now.Ive got my nephew into us big time and my 14 year old has said enough is enough hes gonna start watching at his mums. |
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amy pond pwooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ar
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Font taken on board..report for Fade...Ive been hungover all day:~ohyah!: |
25,000 visitors...if youve been one may I thank you ,I never expected 25 let alone thousands.
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As Khan said, you need to have someone proofread your work. That still doesn't take away from a good point. The defense HAS to step up.
While we are talking about Doctor Who, I have to say that Matt Smith (the current Doctor) brings back the fun of Doctors in the 70s and 80s. I agree that the cheesiness is part of the Doctor Who appeal. David Tennant and Christopher Eccleston played the role way too straight... |
thanks appreciate all points,I take everything on board ie font change. I hear the proofreading but I dont know anyone who can. I run the spell check but then i use it.
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I think that needs to be changed. |
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