vancejohnson82
01-21-2011, 08:02 AM
I know, its terrible....but I've been told that this is what you need to do...
I would actually appreciate some feedback, both good and bad as I know some of it is good and some is bad...
http://bruceshadow.wordpress.com/
Hogan11
01-26-2011, 07:24 PM
Well, I enjoyed it and would encourage you to write more. Good stuff.
JPPT1974
01-26-2011, 08:06 PM
Hey I love to write too. As you should go for it. As writing is a hobby of mine. Nothing shameful about doing something that you like!
BroncoBuff
01-28-2011, 04:12 PM
Great approach vj, wish more people felt that way about this place. If you're working on something or need to know something, ask ... and if you know something or have a solution, share it.
I'll pm some stuff, but now, to all I give my favorite simple writing tip: The word THAT is overused by more than double. A good edit will delete most THATs ,,, try it sometime ;D